Ok, everyone's a critique and no I can not prove better but in the interest of discussion...I don't understand the wardrobe here. The breasts being revealed doesn't fit for me. Maybe with a lower saturation and exaggerated pose? Or an even more "normal" pose with the breasts inexplicably exposed. Like maybe a family portrait type shot with breasts. Your work is fabulous and I'm completely jealous of your exposure and color so please take this as though it comes from an enviously appreciative admirer, because it does. I am a musician and business owner and as such, considering this is for sale, take my critique lightly, however I simply can not find an environment befitting the purchase of this pic. Perhaps I'm just being too "artistic" or too "business" and need to relax. Perhaps another commenter can establish a dialogue here to fill in the gaps in my appreciation. I would love to see the same model, same attire, seated in a traditional forward facing pose, body at 45degrees head facing forward with vignetting and uncomfortable smile with the breasts exposed but....slightly under focused and exposed. Am I being too trendy? I'd like to think not.